We’re sorry, but unfortunately, we have to decline your application at this time for the following reasons: We feel that the personality you've written does not reflect the changes that Kara has gone through at your taken canon point. The relationships that define Kara's motives and feelings are also not adequately expanded on.
Additionally, there were numerous grammatical errors in your samples, and we feel that the character's voice and personality were not adequately displayed.
Please feel free to make revisions to your application and re-submit it at a later app cycle.
Rejected
We’re sorry, but unfortunately, we have to decline your application at this time for the following reasons:
We feel that the personality you've written does not reflect the changes that Kara has gone through at your taken canon point. The relationships that define Kara's motives and feelings are also not adequately expanded on.
Additionally, there were numerous grammatical errors in your samples, and we feel that the character's voice and personality were not adequately displayed.
Please feel free to make revisions to your application and re-submit it at a later app cycle.